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digis asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 1 month ago

English speakers, could you help me?

Could anyone tell me if I wrote this paragraph correctly and whether it sounds natural to an English person? I myself am not a native speaker of English. 

The design for the slaughterhouse was created by architect Janis Nowak in 1880.

He modelled the design of the building after the so-called “humane” concept of the slaughterhouse built in Warsaw in 1871. Its main innovation was the physical separation of the areas for keeping animals from the slaughtering premises.

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