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digis asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 1 month ago

English speakers, could you help me?

Could anyone tell me if I wrote this paragraph correctly and whether it sounds natural to an English person? I myself am not a native speaker of English.

The butchers purchased this building in 1630, and until 1895 as well as in the period from 1927 to 1940, this building was owned by the Butchers Guild of Warsaw.

From 1895 to 1927 it was the property of other organisations comprising butchers.

The guild house was where the the guild’s treasury, flag, drums, rifles were kept and where occupational and festive gatherings of the guild took place.

The building is known to have had a water supply system since 1600.

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  • Anonymous
    3 weeks ago

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  • Craig
    Lv 6
    1 month ago

    You've done a fantastic job.  I might have used a different phrase here or there, or different punctuation in places.  But you've written a far better paragraph than a great many native English speakers could.

    I would recommend changing "comprising butchers" to "comprised of butchers".  "Comprise" is a bit of a tricky word.  You might want to avoid it by simply saying "other butchers' organizations" or even "other butcher organizations".  Either would be understood.

    Well done!  Really well done!

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