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What do you think of my poem, Lovecraft?

 Lovecraft

Time combines all tenses,

Cycling as one word, heard.

Humanity chatters itself away,

Thinking of tomorrow, now,

And yesterday.

Consciousness whirls around,

As the Earth spins with in gravity

While rocks are reincarnated to

Bones. Destiny is beyond decay.

For everything is, was, will be & nothing,

In many ways. Here we are.

And yesterday.

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    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    It's OK.

    But you should break it into stanzas.

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