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Hi. Under which category does this literary piece fall into? Does it reflect a certain style of writing? Does anything stand out?
sometimes i’m a poet.
mostly when i least expect it.
right now it’s not one
of those times.
you see,
i don’t have the creativity
to express fancifully
the inexplicable
feeling that you arouse
within me;
places and spaces within me
that ribcage should have
kept unthreatened.
free from the strongholds
of love.
it’s a feeling;
one that bones(ribcage) and will
could not keep out.
yes, a feeling that kindles
this passion against
which my heart lies bare;
unarmed. unprotected.
like a newborn child separated
from mother’s arms.
such is my heart
before this passion
that you command.
i guess i don’t have
a say in it.
and i guess that i’m
in no position to make requests..
but, can you assure me
that you’ll be gentle?
please..
can you promise me
that your loveliness
will not change when
everything else around us
changes?
can you?
will you?
2 Answers
- 2 months ago
"UNDER which category does it fall?" or "Which category does it fall INTO?", but not both UNDER and INTO.
It falls into the category of "95% crap poetry."
Delete every line that doesn't contain words presenting an actual image (which, in this poem, would be all the lines that don't contain "ribcage") and then re-start from there.
- THE BANNIBAL ONELv 72 months ago
It's most likely free style.
The lines should be 4 lines or 5 long in each.
You have it all one line each.
The 'ribcage" sticks out.