Lv 6
? asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 1 month ago

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

As the many pigeons soared up, a different type of bird flew out of them and away from them.


2 Answers

  • 1 month ago
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    "soared upward", not up. "a bird of a different species emerged from the flock and flew off on its own".

  • GA41
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    It is grammatically correct, however, the sentence is a little awkward.

    As a flock of pigeons took wing, a bird of a different specie flew out from among the flock.

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