Are these sentences correct ?

1.Titanic, which is a huge blockbuster movie, is one of my top most favourite movies. 

2. My sister that has long hair is a teacher in a school.

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  • Cogito
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    Not quite.

    1) Titanic, a huge blockbuster movie, is one of my favourites.

    The 'which is' is unnecessary.  Also, 'top' and 'most' are equally pointless.

    2) My sister, who is a school teacher, has long hair.

    People are never 'that' - they're always 'who'.  It would be more appropriate to mention her career before her appearance.

  • User
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    1 - has a problem with the adjectives at the end. It's repetitive

    -- "top" means very nearly the same thing as "most favourite"

    and IF you really want to use both (it's OK if you do), there needs to be a comma separating them.

    - Titanic, which is a huge blockbuster movie, is one of my top, most favourite movies.

    2 - is grammatically correct but is a LITTLE awkwardly worded. I would say: it should NOT be marked wrong or lose you any points. However, some less-awkward alternatives:

    - My long-haired sister is...

    - My sister with the long hair is...

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