Grammar and sentence check please!?
Dr. Buckley, who wrote an article of 'Bridging the Breast Cancer Divide,', claimed that a December 2913 New York Times article's statement is true however, it lacked evidences especially based on geographical data.
- Mr. SmartypantsLv 71 month agoFavorite Answer
It lacked -evidence-. 'Evidence' is an 'uncounted noun' meaning that you say more or less evidence, not 6 evidences or 12 evidences.
Also the comma after 'however' should be before it. 'However' doesn't need to be followed with a comma. And there should be a comma after 'evidence'. It lacked evidence, especially based on geographical data.
Also a Dr. who can read articles in a newspaper 900 years in the future is in the wrong job! He could make much more as a psychic!