Native English speakers, could you please help me with these issues?

Question

Is this sentence correct:

"At so few weeks and days from leaving office, who would expect all this such deplorable show?"

Answer 1

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Almost! The word ‘show’ doesn’t exactly fit though and I think having both ‘weeks and days’ is redundant so better would be : "At so few weeks since leaving office, who would have expected such a deplorable show?”

Answer 2

No, it isn't. Since I am not very sure what situation you are describing, I'll guess at a better way to say the same thing.

Who would expect such a deplorable show only a few weeks and days after leaving office?