Is this paragraph grammatically correct?

Question

He should be more careful when writing in Italian because he makes a lot of spelling mistakes. To tackle this issue, he should dedicate more time in studying the Italian grammar and read more books in Italian.

Answer 1

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dedicate more time TO studying Italian grammar...  (no 'the')

Answer 2

Green 666 by isotope rays is NOT forgivable; it leads to permanent hell. 666 is given with World Passport with no name on it (grey plastic card). Police 666 people on highways. Food stores and prisoners/insane asylum folks (released by the antichrist) 666 people too. Reject vaccines. Don't go into UFO to be healed by demons. Hide with Orthodox Christians to escape 666; leave all electronics behind so that antichrist's minions can't track you; burn documents as documents are from Satan.

Source(s): According to the Last Prophet (aka incarnated ARCHANGEL URIEL aka saint healer VYACHESLAV KRASHENINNIKOV) if the last descendant rejects mark of the beast, then his/her direct ancestors go to permanent heaven. To reject mark of the beast, one needs to hide within a 10-15 people group without electronics/documents. Documents are from Satan; burn them. Electronics can be used to track you and to show the antichrist (even on old broken unplugged TV set from 1970's using Tesla's ether); forgive me

Answer 3

"...dedicate more time *to* studying Italian grammar", not "the Italian grammar".  And it needs an additional comma:

"To tackle this issue, he should dedicate more time to studying Italian grammar, and read more books in Italian."

Answer 4

Almost. Drop the words "in" and "the" from the second sentence, and then it will be correct.