der asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 2 months ago

How good does the English seem here?

The film "The Fellowship of the Ring" tells of what happened during the wars for Middle Earth, and how the Ring of the power came to be. The white sorcerer Gandalf realizes that Bilbo has somehow got his pows on the magic Ring. From that moment on, he will instruct Frodo with the task of bringing it to the elves. There he should receive further instructions.

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I'm learning English.

Update:

Thanks. Why did you put a comma before where in the last subordinate clause? Where does not introduce a main clause there.

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  • Anonymous
    2 months ago

    Your English is good!  It just needs a little tinkering:

    The film "The Fellowship of the Ring" tells THE STORY of what happened during the wars for Middle Earth, and OF how the Ring of POWER came to be. The white sorcerer Gandalf realizes that Bilbo has somehow got his pAws on the magic Ring. From that moment on, he will instruct Frodo REGARDING the task of bringing it to the elves, WHERE he should receive further instructions.

    "to get one's paws on something"  ---- not formal language

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