What do you think about this drawing?

Question

Answer 1

     Strong personality transmitted through those eyes. I like that. Attitude in the posture. Big hair reminiscent of the 80's. 

     There is a lot of thought going into animation, as you clearly know. This really isn't bad at all and would beat the heck out of the weak animated character concepts populating recent animated TV series. 

Answer 2

We'll name her "Clodhopper". Feet big enough for a queen!

Answer 3

It is actually an improvement, but is not great.

Answer 4

Amateur.  You are still in the outline phase, which may be ok for coloring books but as a picture it's lacking shading and 'presence'.