Is this sentence correct ?

Question

Nothing in the whole universe speaks louder than sun for the existence of God. 

Answer 1

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Original sentence:

> Nothing in the whole universe speaks louder than sun for the existence of God.

1) Omit "whole" to give the sentence more power

> Nothing in the universe speaks louder than sun for the existence of God.

2) Add "the" before "sun"

> Nothing in the universe speaks louder than the sun for the existence of God.

3) You can consider shuffling the sentence elements to end on your main idea

> Nothing in the universe speaks louder for the existence of God than the sun.

4) In high-stakes writing like college applications, for publication, for public speaking, etc, you should probably change "louder" to "more loudly." Otherwise, you can consider letting "louder" stand.

> Nothing in the universe speaks more loudly for the existence of God than the sun.

FROM THIS ...

> Nothing in the whole universe speaks louder than sun for the existence of God.

... TO THIS

> Nothing in the universe speaks more loudly for the existence of God than the sun.

Answer 2

The poster below has a good sentence structure. But another one could be:

"In the whole universe nothing speakes louder for the existance of God than the sun".

You do need "the", to set the sun off as a unique thing.

Source(s): Native American English speaker for 68 years.