Is this sentence correct?

Question

You haven't written complete sentences many times; you have just strung your thoughts which do not make sense..

Answer 1

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It needs some work.

Try this:

You haven't had much practice in writing complete sentences, you just string words and thoughts together, which do not make sense.

Answer 2

No, it's not.

You haven't written complete sentences many times; you have just strung your thoughts TOGETHER, which doES not make sense..

Answer 3

No its not personally i am eating