Is this sentence correct in English?

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Travel agencies should be able to communicate to Millennials through the modern social platforms to inform them about what the advantage is of booking a trip in a more traditional manner. 

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Understandable, but this edit will work better: Travel agencies should be able to communicate with Millennials through modern social media platforms, to better inform them of the advantages of booking a trip in a more traditional manner.