Could you please help me shorten this sentence ?

 In the literature review, the methodology and every aspect of the research problem were described, which included digital marketing and the process of organizational performance in telecommunications firms in Jordan.

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  • 2 months ago
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    I would break it into two.  Especially if the complaint is that it is a run on sentence

    In the literature review, the methodology and every aspect of the research problem were described. The descriptions included digital marketing and the process of organizational performance of telecommunications firms in Jordan.

  • Andrew
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    2 months ago

    Oftheresearchproblem, themethodologyintheliteraturereview andeveryotheraspect - includingdigitalmarketing, processorganisationalperformance intelecommunicationsfirms inJordanweredescribed.

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