Is this sentence grammatically correct ?

My greed blinded me so much so that I got my hand in his pocket while he was asleep and took the key out of his pocket, opened the cupboard and stole the money without realizing the level of risk I was taking. 

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  • 1 month ago
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    First: you can either say "My greed blinded me so much that I..." or "My greed blinded me so that I...".  But not "so much so that I".

    Apart from that, I think it's grammatical but it's kinda wordy.  I almost took it for a run-on sentence.  I would recommend saying: "My greed blinded me so much that I took the key out of his pocket while he was asleep, opened the cupboard and stole the money..." etc.

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