Are the following sentence grammatically correct?

It is good for eye health to take a break from the computer every hour.

It is good for health of the eyes to make a pause of computer every one hour. 

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  • Zirp
    Lv 7
    1 month ago
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    "to make a pause of computer" is not English

    and eye-health needs a hyphen

  • 1 month ago

    It is good for eye health to take a break from the computer every hour.

    It is good for the health of the eyes to take a break from the computer every hour. 

    It is good for the health of the eyes to pause from using the computer every hour. 

  • Pearl
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    they both sound good

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