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Idol groups are the most popular singer obviously at that time, there were other popular different types of Korean music such as dance, techno and soft rock. 

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  • Anonymous
    2 months ago
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    It was very hard at first reading even to understand what you are trying to say.

    Possibly: "Idol groups produced the most popular type of vocal music at that time. There were also other types of popular music such as dance, techno, and soft rock."

    I assume that your potential readership would know what an 'idol group' was at that time. In Britain I do not know that expression.

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