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I always have wanted to be mature. Well, as I get older, people do not become mature that much. I am getting to buy it and try to live just be myself.

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    1 month ago
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    This one is a bit of a mess.... no offense.   Not sure exactly what your intent is here.   May I suggest (IF I am interpreting your meaning correctly):

    I always wanted to be mature.  As I have gotten older I have come to realize people do not so much as 'mature' emotionally, spiritually or mentally:  they simply age.  I am trying to accept this and just live my life in the best way possible.

    Hope this helps.

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