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In the next 10 years, there will be a few unwanted and sad moments coming to my life. Even though it happens, I wish I have strength to overcome them.
- blankLv 61 month agoFavorite Answer
May I suggest?
It seems certain that in the next ten years everyone will have challenges and sad moments to overcome. My life will be no different. My hope is I will have the strength to handle these issues that will come my way.
Hope this helps.
- ZapataLv 61 month ago
Not "coming to my life" , but "occurring in my life"
Not "Even though it happens" , but "Even though this will happen"
Not "overcome them" but "overcome it"