What do you think of this poem?
This time, it seems we have so little
The clock ticks by
And the moments fly
This time is so precious
Yet we let it slip away
We fritter away seconds which will never be regained
I yearn to hold a single moment
And hold it close, hold it tight
But somehow it still slips by
For time is an ever changing flow
And we must not dwell on the past
But treat each day as though it's our last
- 2 months ago
Very beautiful :-) I am going to write it on my diary
- GA41Lv 72 months ago
I like it! It is truth. I believe stating: "Time, its seems we have so little", would sound better than "this time". Same idea for second verse first line.
- VivianLv 42 months ago
The two last lines in the first and forth stanzas are as AA, while the other lines as free verse.