Are the names and occupations realistic?
I'm writing a mystery about five couples on a weekend getaway.
Here are names of the ten characters:
Adam Peters, 22 years old, firefighter ex-navy medic
Melanie Peters, 23 years old, Adam's wife, an upper elementary school language arts teacher.
Paul Carothers, 39 year old cable installer and repairman
Janine Carothers, 37 years old, Paul's wife, a cable installer and repairman
Ross Jenkins, 19 years old, shift manager @ Wendy's. Sarah Raleigh, 20 years old, Ross's girlfriend, college student, aspiring novelist
Geoff Green, 39 year old veterinarian
Tammy Green, 35 year old, Geoff's wife, Avon saleswoman
David Lefevre, 41 year old recently divorced CPA
Caitlin Saunders, 25 years old, DJ and part time pro-NFL cheerleader
So are the names and occupations realistic or do I need to tweak them up a bit. Their names are just names. Occupations are not really central to the plot.
- RichardLv 66 days ago
I'd make the "Adam" chareacter at least 5 years older. Other than that, these sound generic enough for a Hallmark movie.
- conley39Lv 72 months ago
Those could work with the exception of a 22 year old ex-Navy medic which is unlikely.
- JudyLv 62 months ago
Yes, the names and occupations sound believable.
- Anonymous2 months ago
I love them all with the exception of Avon sales lady. Most of them were pushy and unlikable. Good luck!.
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- WilliamLv 72 months ago
Looks OK to me except:
Paul Carothers, 39 year old cable installer and repairmanJanine Carothers, 37 years old, Paul's wife, a cable installer and repairman
Are they both cable installers and repairman?
If not, she needs an occupation even if she's a house wife.
- JesereLv 72 months ago
Navy Corpsman are the name of the enlisted Medical personnel. They are not firefighters. I was a Corpsman in the Navy