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I was going to his concert in 2014 when he was scheduled to visit America. However, it was cancelled due to his health failure and it is a shame I missed the last chance to him at the concert.

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  • ?
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    1 month ago
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    "due to his health". We don't talk about a health failure.  "Failure" is only used with "heart", and that would mean he died in 2014. 

    "I missed the last chance to see him at the concert."  or "to see him live".

  • Anonymous
    1 month ago

    I was going to his concert in 2014 when he was scheduled to visit America. However, it was cancelled because he had to have back surgery; it is a shame I missed the last chance to see him perform live.

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