How do you like my Lockdown poem ?
I wish I had boat
With a wheelhouse
And a wooden door to shut.
I'd sail to who knows where
And find the sod
Wh stole my dog.
- HankMoodyLv 71 month agoFavorite Answer
- 3 weeks ago
i believe poetry writing is a GOD gifted skill specially with good assonance.I have also written several poems in lock-down with creative mind.The specialty of my poetry is that the last word matching resonance in every sentence.your poetry is mind-blowing.your poetry is nature related.you have presented your untold words.very much appreciating.
- 3 weeks ago
I'd say it's funny....so..it's ok
- Lapiz DominoesLv 74 weeks ago
That is one fine piece of free verse.
I hope you find that doggone biatch
and your li`l friend
empty his pet - pilfering- and - selling stash
then joyous - row both your dog
back to your happy shore
enjoying being very very riach
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- AggyLv 71 month ago
Full of Freudian imagery.
"A boat with a wheelhouse?" *sniggers* Clearly a reference to female genitalia.
"A wooden door to shut" yes, we have all felt the frustration of being denied access to the wheelhouse.
"Sail to who knows where". Drifting aimlessly through life
" who stole my dog" searching for a mythical dog which represents the dreams and aspirations of youth.
"and find the sod" seeking some sort of reason for the world being a load of ar$e in thwarting all your hopes
Leaving the "o" off the final "who" signifying the terrifying incompleteness of an unfulfilled life. (or it could be a typo).
- samLv 51 month ago
I hope your dog is ok.
- BlueiisLv 71 month ago
Well it's not as good as your earlier works, but I do find it quite captivating. Imma give this poem an 8 out of 10.
- 1 month ago
My mouse trap go :)
- Anonymous1 month ago
I wanted to chew my fist off.