How do I rewrite this so it sounds poetic?
Desiring and craving you takes just a poor excuse.
- 1 month agoFavorite Answer
I think the sentence stands fine on its own. However, you could substitute craving with yearning or longing perhaps.
As an alternate suggestion: Desiring and yearning for you needs only the poorest of excuses.
- LindaLv 71 month ago
To spend an hour in your presence
Makes my heart yearn with desire.
I never want to be very far away
From the way you make me feel each day.Source(s): Corny but true