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Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 2 months ago

Is this poem good?

Timothy 

The young girl climbs into the bed

She gives her man some head

He enters her vag 

But it's a red flag 

They forgot the candy wrapper

They didn't know they created a cracker 

3 month flew by

She needed a bathroom nearby 

She drank to many budwisers 

How her stomach was on fire 

She sat on the toliet 

She didn't feel any enjoyment

It was more than just pee

It was a fetus to be

She started to flush 

She looked down and felt crushed 

She saw a rat in the water

It could of been her son or daughter 

 She called the plumber 

But the news was a bummer

Now she's never be a mother 

She lost her divinty

She flushed timothy

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  • Anonymous
    2 months ago

    You have a dirty mind. Poetry requires a clean mind.

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  • art
    Lv 6
    2 months ago

    crap, and in really bad taste

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  • Stella
    Lv 7
    2 months ago

    Trump will probably appoint you as Poet Laureate.

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  • Lôn
    Lv 7
    2 months ago

    Absolute shite!!

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