Is this paragraph grammatically correct?
“Hi, i will ask my parents to call your father. Before that i would like to know that whether you would like to move to Canada as even though i am helping my dad in family business, i am planning to move to Canada on a student visa by this coming September. I am planning to take spouse along.”
- RPLv 72 months ago
It looks acceptable, but you might consider: I'm going to ask my parents to call your father. Before I ask them, I'd like to know if you you plan to move to Canada. While I am helping my dad in family business, I will be moving to Canada, with my spouse, on a student visa no later than September.
- Anonymous2 months ago