Can anyone check my iambic pentameter?
Shakespearean Style Poem, I have a hard time with iambic pentameter, please check and which lines are not iambic pentameter, do you have any suggestions to fix the line?
A: The question hanging over eerily.
B: Love cannot be known anywhere beyond.
A: My hope for heart darkens so drearily,
B: for wondering actions chemical bond.
C: The future is unknown about this Earth,
D: yet always continue to be playful,
C: and in the moment never know its worth.
D: Attraction is perfection so fatal,
E: and unrelentingly submerge myself.
F: Invading my mind day and through the night,
E: this cannot live hidden on a shelf,
F: blindingly beautiful in moonlight.
G: Now I must away with a rightful heart,
G: Remember my right words whilst we’re apart.
- 4 weeks ago