Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 4 weeks ago

Do you guys like this poem I wrote?

I see nothing but tears

An ache pulses in my heart

Frozen by my fears

I purchase a rope from the mart

I walk back home and I reach the door

I attach the noose to a wall

I can't bear it, I can't take any more

I perish and I won't live to see next fall

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  • Oleg
    Lv 7
    4 weeks ago
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    No, it shows you are thinking of suicide, as Satan influences you to.

    Know that God loves you and wants the best for you, and instead His help by His son Jesus Christ who defeated Satan, sin and death on the cross, and was raised from the dead on the 3rd day.

    If you repent of your sins and are baptized in His name at the church, He will help you overcome your problems and will give you His love and peace and courage and will lead you to God's Kingdom of Heaven.

    Better go to the church tomorrow and talk with the priest / pastor about your problems and how they can be solved, while praying to God for help.

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  • Anonymous
    4 weeks ago

    It's good, but depressing. Are you a teenager?

    • Lôn
      Lv 7
      4 weeks agoReport

      Yes, a very pouty one who uses too much eye make-up.

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  • Lôn
    Lv 7
    4 weeks ago

    NO, NO, NO..... however many times you post this rubbish the answer will still be the same Mildred, Millie, Oila, Lila ,Melody or whatever account you're posting from today.

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  • Anonymous
    4 weeks ago

    Free cash b0nks

    With the wonky Blanche's

    In'sin'you'ate'shones

    By pens of in Supplanted Posies.

    The Gollywog on the jam jar

    Removed by the the rueing felled siblings and beckoning colostrums.

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