Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 month ago

Is my poem good?

I love you,

I love you  

I love you, it’s true 

Shield me from harm, 

& murder my truth 

I love you 

I love you 

So cut out my eyes

Bask me in charm,  

with your sweet little lies 

I love you, I love you

So Rip out my tongue 

Tell me that you love me,

And make me 

2 Answers

  • audrey
    Lv 7
    1 month ago
    Favorite Answer

    No. Didn't get any better from yesterday.

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