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Anonymous asked in Education & ReferenceWords & Wordplay · 1 month ago

Are these three lines grammatically correct?

I've grown old, not from my outside, but from my inside, in outside I'm young, but in my inside I've become too old seeking happiness in life.

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  • RP
    Lv 7
    1 month ago
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    No; this is a run on sentence. Try: I've grown old, not from outside, but from inside. Outside, I'm young, but, inside, I've become too old seeking life's happiness.

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  • Anonymous
    1 month ago

    "In outside" is awkward and can be reworded, such as "on the outside." "In my inside," same thing, it should be reworded, such as "on the inside."

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  • Anonymous
    1 month ago

    No.

    I've grown old, not from the outside, but from the inside.

    On the outside I'm young, but on the inside I've become too old by seeking happiness in life.

    You are right. But that kind of aging is reversible. When we seek happiness for ourselves, it eludes us. But when we focus on the happiness of others, our own comes back to us as a byproduct.

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