Is this poem good?

I love you,

I love you  

I love you, it’s true 

Shield me from harm, 

& murder my truth 

I love you 

I love you 

So cut out my eyes

Bask me in charm,  

with your sweet little lies 

I love you, I love you

So Rip out my tongue 

Tell me that you love me,

And make me 

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  • Anonymous
    1 month ago

    No. Not in the least

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  • Anonymous
    1 month ago

    Lol......don't quit your day job.

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  • Anonymous
    1 month ago

    Nope, that mess of words sounds like crap.

    Your last name, William, is definitely NOT Shakespeare.

    You're doing a much greater service to mankind if you

    continue to operate the French Fryers at Wendy's.

    • Lv 4
      1 month agoReport

      LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • 1 month ago

    Sort of sadistic at intervals but otherwise creepy.

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    • Arni1 month agoReport

      write war poetry if you want sadism, i write viking poetry and it can often be better the more gore there is in it. 

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