Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Entertainment & MusicPolls & Surveys · 1 month ago

Does my poem have potential ?

I love you,

I love you  

I love you, it’s true 

Shield me from harm, 

& murder my truth 

I love you 

I love you 

So cut out my eyes

Bask me in charm,  

with your sweet little lies 

I love you, I love you

So Rip out my tongue 

Tell me that you love me,

And make me belong

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  • 1 month ago

    To line a bird cage, yes.

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  • 1 month ago

    Yes. Remove the “that” from “tell me that you love me”

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