melody asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 4 weeks ago

Is my poem good?

I love you,

I love you

I love you, it’s true

Shield me from harm,

& murder my truth

I love you

I love you

So cut out my eyes

Bask me in charm,

with your sweet little lies

I love you, I love you

So Rip out my tongue

Tell me that you love me,

And make me belong

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  • Marli
    Lv 7
    4 weeks ago
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    Mildred, I don't have the smarts to judge your poem; but your obsession to be hurt by a person who you know to be false (the lies) and your compulsion to repost this poem sounds like a cry for help.

    Either show it to the person you want to be tortured by or show it to a mental health professional.  We can't help you so don't show it here.

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  • 4 weeks ago

    It sounds too amateurish.

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  • Lôn
    Lv 7
    4 weeks ago

    NO Mildred!!..stop inflicting these terrible 'poems' on us day after day after day.. Find another hobby for suck's fake!

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