Is this sentence correct? ?

It's good to be ignorant about yourself in some ways because my journey of self-discovery led me to depression.  

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  • Anonymous
    4 weeks ago
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    The sentence is 100% grammatically correct. You might want to break the sentence up into two sentences though, to communicate your point more effectively.

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  • RP
    Lv 7
    4 weeks ago

    Yes, but you might also consider: It's good to be ignorant about yourself in some ways because my self-discovery led to depression.

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  • 4 weeks ago

    You have a pronoun problem. You're using "yourself" in the generic sense, meaning everyone, but then you say "my journey". Don't switch like that. I think you're trying to say "It was better when I was ignorant about myself because my journey of self-discovery resulted in depression."

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  • Laurie
    Lv 7
    4 weeks ago

    The grammar is correct. The content is specious and, I think, just plain wrong.

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  • 4 weeks ago

    Try: “My journey to self-discovery led me to depression. In some ways, ignorance is bliss.”

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  • Anonymous
    4 weeks ago

    In addition to Anonymous's input, which is spot-on, you'd need a comma before the word "because."

  • Anonymous
    4 weeks ago

    It is correct neither ideologically nor grammatically.  Ideologically, it relies on a logical fallacy.  Grammatically, it improperly jumps from speaking of yourself with the hypothetical "you" to speaking of yourself with the literal "me."

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