aiste asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 4 weeks ago

Fluent speakers of English, could you help me with my English?

I am not an English speaker and I need to translate a description into English. How could I make this sentence sound more appealing and more natural?

Guests will have a change to enjoy sun, warm and fresh air and relax in 200 sq. meter terrace overlooking striking views of the Atlantic ocean and white sandy beaches.

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  • 4 weeks ago
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    “Guests will have a chance to enjoy the sun, get some fresh air, and relax on the 200 square meter terrace, overlooking the breathtaking view of the Atlantic Ocean and its white sandy beaches.”

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  • 4 weeks ago

    Your sentence is about the terrace so put it at the beginning of the sentece.

    On the 200 square meter terrace, guests can enjoy the sun, the warm, fresh air and relax while surveying the striking view of the Atlantic Ocean.

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