Steph asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 month ago

What do you think about my poem? Not quite finished.?

I am stuck in a recurring nightmare

How many times will you say

This was the last time I swear

Someone come shake me awake

And take away this heartbreak

I am stronger than you think

You left me without a paddle

But I won't let my boat sink

I will not let myself drown

I will make it onto dry ground

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  • Anonymous
    1 month ago

    You  posted this poem a number of times. Are you in some type of abusive relationship?   

    It's good that you know your way to the shore but I think you could use some help.

    • ❤️1 month agoReport

      If you are in the US, call the National Domestic Violence Hotline at 1-800-799-7233 or There is also a teen hotline. Call Childhelp USA at (800) 4-A-CHILD ([800] 422-4453). 

      Please make the call.

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  • 1 month ago

    I have a reoccurring nightmare

    How many times will I say,

    This was the last I swear?

    You always come and shake me awake

    And take away my heartache.

    But I am stronger than you think

    You left me hurt without a paddle

    But you won't let me sink

    And I won't let myself go down

    But make it onto dryer ground

    • ?1 month agoReport

      "But you won't let me sink" ... 2 boats and a helicopter.   

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