digis asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 7 days ago

Fluent speakers of English, could you help me with my English?

I need to translate a historical text but I'm not sure it sounds natural for English speakers as I'm not a native speaker. Do I need to make any corrections? I would appreciate any answers.

The wooden synagogue built by Tom Nowak became decrepit more than 50 years after its completion.

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  • Anonymous
    6 days ago
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    More than 50 years after its completion, the wooden synagogue built by Tom Nowak had become dilapidated and ramshackle.

  • 6 days ago

    I'd use "fell into disrepair" instead of "became decrepit". Otherwise, go with it.

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