Fluent speakers of English, could you help me with my English?
I need to translate a historical text but I'm not sure it sounds natural for English speakers as I'm not a native speaker. Do I need to make any corrections? I would appreciate any answers.
The wooden synagogue built by Tom Nowak became decrepit more than 50 years after its completion.
- Anonymous6 days agoFavorite Answer
More than 50 years after its completion, the wooden synagogue built by Tom Nowak had become dilapidated and ramshackle.
- CrustyCurmudgeonLv 76 days ago
I'd use "fell into disrepair" instead of "became decrepit". Otherwise, go with it.