What do you think of this poem called "Blind Eyes?"?

Rode the tide until it took me

It washed my body whole

The eyes couldn't see

I had everywhere to go

The waves told me to be

Free as a skeleton, so

The blood of the sea

Only death, I know

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  • Anonymous
    2 months ago
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    It's written by a teenager who's never read any poetry.

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  • Pearl
    Lv 7
    2 months ago

    i think its a good poem

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  • Mary
    Lv 7
    2 months ago

    Lacks structure, form, meter, and anything other than the basic rudiments of a rhyme scheme. 

    It’s words written down by someone who doesn’t understand what separates a poem from words thrown on a page.

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  • 2 months ago

    Sounds like something written by an angsty goth girl in high school who listens to My Chemical Romance

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