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 I'm a full-fledged adult, but I get as excited as a little kid when it comes to my birthday. I know that on that special day, I will receive gifts, eat cake, and be having a party. I start my birthday by sleeping late and to make my favorite breakfast—pancakes and sausage. After breakfast, I like rollerblading, biking, or to run through my neighborhood. I pretend that people know it's my birthday and are coming out of their houses to sing to me. (No one ever does, but it's a great fantasy.) Returning home, I shower and am getting ready for my party. I have to fix the food, set the table, and be decorating the living room. Inviting my close friends and to serve a special meal is a big part of the celebration. After dinner, everyone sings "Happy Birthday," we eat cake, and I will open my presents. Then we listen to music and are telling silly stories about the past year. If I live to be 100, I will always have a birthday party and have been nice to myself on my special day.

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    2 months ago

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