Can I make this sentence better?

Of the individual’s family and friends who were contacted, 9 were referred to Outreach, as a source if they or the individual referred desires assistance in engaging in treatment or other supportive services at any time, and 2 were referred to treatment as previous clients. 

1 Answer

  • 3 weeks ago

    Yeah, you can,  by making it more than one sentence and simplifying.

    Of the person's family and friends who were contacted, nine were referred to Outreach if they desired assistance with treatment or other supportive services. Two were referred for treatment as previous clients.

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