Ark asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 2 months ago

Could you make this English sound better for native speakers?

I don't know how to say this naturally. This is probably long, so you can divide this into more than one sentence if you think it's necessary.

In this movie, the heroin loses important and familiar things for her, such as her boyfriend, a shop that she has inherited from her mother, her friends, sometimes contrary to her will and, on other occasions, at her own will. 

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  • Bob
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    2 months ago
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    In this movie, the heroine loses a variety of things which are both important and familiar to her, such as a shop that she has inherited from her mother, her friends and even her boyfriend. Some of these things she lost involuntarily and others through her own actions and deeds.

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