Native speakers of English, could you help me with my English sentences?
I have to translate rules for kids with mental disabilities and these rules are classified into two groups - the way a child has to behave at school and outside of it, or the way he/she has to treat others. Did I translated the phrases in the way that English speakers would use them?
I WALK AT SCHOOL. / I CAN RUN OUTSIDE.
I SPEAK IN CALM VOICE AT SCHOOL. / I CAN SPEAK LOUDLY OUTSIDE.
I FOCUS ON MY TASKS DURING LESSONS. / I CAN PLAY AND REST DURING RECESS.
I GREET PEOPLE AND TREAT OTHERS WITH KINDNESS. / OTHERS GREET ME ALSO AND TREAT ME WITH KINDNESS.
I KNOW THAT I AM IMPORTANT. / I KNOW THAT OTHERS ARE ALSO IMPORTANT.