(English CHeck) What do you think about this poem?
Um~ a shiny glass, having a drink at dead of night.
Rose colored rouge and manicured nails, she's also... well...... having a drink.
The air thick with tobacco smoke,
The cabarret in Bourbon road
Drinking for fourty minutes on my own.
- TinaLv 73 weeks ago
'Cabaret' and 'forty' are not spelled correctly.
Can you say what makes this a poem?
If you set it out differently, isn't it simply prose?
Um~ a shiny glass, having a drink at dead of night. Rose colored rouge and manicured nails, she's also... well...... having a drink.The air thick with tobacco smoke,the cabaret in Bourbon road drinking for forty minutes on my own.
- william ellisLv 73 weeks ago
The last stanza needs changing for you set up that stanza with the others and you shouldn't put yourself so bluntly into it ruins the flow …...
- Aster RhoidsLv 63 weeks ago
What is this? A scenario?