(English CHeck) What do you think about this poem?

Um~ a shiny glass, having a drink at dead of night.

Rose colored  rouge and manicured nails, she's also... well...... having a drink.

The air thick with tobacco smoke,

The cabarret in Bourbon road

Drinking for fourty minutes on my own.

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  • Tina
    Lv 7
    3 weeks ago

    'Cabaret' and 'forty' are not spelled correctly.

    Can you say what makes this a poem?

    If you set it out differently, isn't it simply prose?

    Um~ a shiny glass, having a drink at dead of night. Rose colored  rouge and manicured nails, she's also... well...... having a drink.The air thick with tobacco smoke,the cabaret in Bourbon road drinking for forty minutes on my own.

  • 3 weeks ago

    The last stanza needs changing for you set up that stanza with the others and you shouldn't put yourself so bluntly into it  ruins the flow …... 

  • 3 weeks ago

    What is this? A scenario?

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