Do you like this stanza lyrics of my rap? Please don't copy it.?

Question

I had started from the bottom

****** waiting for my fall

****** waiting for my autumn

Like a flower bout to blossom

Ya'll be waiting going crazy

I dont do this very often

but im going for your neck

like rabies mixed with an oppossum

Answer 1

Favorite Answer

Good except the last line was corny. I’d say “but I’ll come for you in the night like I’m a rabid opossum”. It just sounds better and more aggressive.

Answer 2

Can't critisize a rap that has "oppossum" in it, even if it is spelled incorrectly.