"You put thorns inside me And all I afraid of was them hurting you"?
Should it be "all I WAS afraid of was them hurting you"?
Can it be improved?
(the 2 "was" are so close)
- Larry K.Lv 73 weeks ago
I was afraid that all of the thorns you placed in my heart would, in time, become thorns in your own.
- 4 weeks ago
"and all i was afraid of them hurting you"
- GypsyfishLv 74 weeks ago
You have two subjects, so you need two verbs. Try restoring the deleted element.
All that I was afraid of was them hurting you.
- RaviLv 44 weeks ago
Or "all I fear if that hurts you more."
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- PearlLv 74 weeks ago
and i was afraid of them hurting you