Are these sentences grammatically correct?

I have a problem in carrying out the transaction. Either you have left the payment procedure incomplete or it may take sometime to process the transaction. I suggest you to go through everything again and provide the accurate information. The following banking details may help you in the transaction:

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  • 3 weeks ago

    "some time" is two words in this context. Otherwise, it's very clear. The suggestions that Barkley Hound made are stylistic, not grammar. Take those suggestions if you ant to. 

  • 3 weeks ago

    I have a problem [in] carrying out the transaction. Either [you have left] the payment procedure (is) incomplete or it may take (more) [some]time to process the transaction. I suggest (that) you [to] go through everything again and provide [the] accurate information. The following banking details may help you [in the transaction]:

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    Just my opinion.

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