opinion on this art?

so I drew this piece a while ago, I just want to know what people think of it! any feed back or criticism would be greatly appreciated! also, sorry, I couldn't turn the picture around :(

(this is a re-ask cos the last one had shadow)

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  • 4 weeks ago
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    It's just an outline, no shading or depth to it.  Unless you're doing coloring books..... it's an unfinished drawing and not truly representative of what your abilities are.

    If you're going for realism, the shoulders are the wrong width, neck too short for the body, etc.  If you're doing Manga, you need lips there somewhere, and more of a nose indicated. Body angles need to be more realistic.  If the sleeves were hand sewn on then the stitch line on the shoulders is ok, but anything commercially made won't show seams like that.

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