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Anonymous asked in Entertainment & MusicMusicLyrics · 3 months ago

Are my lyrics ok? Working on making the syllables in each line of the verses. Opinions other than that please!!!?

Sitting in my room all alone

Wondering if you feel that way that I do

No use picking up my phone

Cause today it is so eerily silent

The ringtone must be busted

I can feel my heart slowly failing

But then you reach out your hand

And slowly I start sailing

Like a lost ship to a lighthouse

Safe in the beacon of your arms

What if you forget about me

Or I become invisible to you

Two weeks can be an eternity

With so many fish in the sea

Why would you still want me

I can feel my heart slowly failing

But then you reach out your hand

And slowly I start sailing

Like a lost ship to a lighthouse

Safe in the beacon of your arms

Can't close my tired, heavy eyes

Afraid you never really loved me

So tried of endless goodbyes

You know that I will yearn for you everyday that we don't speak

I can feel my heart slowly failing

But then you reach out your hand

And slowly I start sailing

Like a lost ship to a lighthouse

Safe in the beacon of your arms

Like a lost ship to a lighthouse

Safe in the beacon of your arms.

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  • 3 months ago
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    The title of this sounds like it should be "Beacon".

    "Cause today it is so eerily silent

    The ringtone must be busted"

    could be

    "The ringtone's off, or the line is down

    Eerie silence without your voice around"

    also....

    "You know that I will yearn for you everyday that we don't speak"

    could be 

    "I yearn for you, I will find a way

    Even if we can't speak every day".

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