How do I correct and make this sound Shakespearean poetic?

I’m a burning candle,

A deep sigh,

A shaking tear,

What have I done that made you be gone (flee)?

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  • 4 weeks ago
    Best Answer

    My heart is a burning candle

    A deep sigh

    A shaking tear

    What act of mine

    Drove you away

    I am lost

    Without you near

  • JOHN
    Lv 7
    4 weeks ago

    Deep and sorrowful are my sighs,

    Hot and searing are my tears,

    As down the ridges of my visage,

    They trembling trickle their way,

    Draining my soul of its hold on life’s tenure.

    What have I done, my love, that bid you

    Be gone from me?

  • 4 weeks ago

    I am a burning candle, a deep sorrowful sigh, a trembling tear,

    What have I done that made you flee so far from me, my dear?

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